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MY FANTASY CREATURE

Posted by: Kesaia | August 1, 2007 |

Today I was walking in the forest, when suddenly a pig was walking towards me. He whispered to me.  The pig’s name was Paul .He is light pink with yellow and orange wings. Paul walked wobbling because he was not so fat but he was all right .He was friendly, kind and magical but he would be a bit angry some times.

 He came up to me and said “How are you today?” I was a little scared but then he said, “You don’t need to be scared.” So I wasn’t scared any more .Then I said “How are you today?” He answered,” I am great thanks!”

 

Three days later I was walking in the forest when I saw Paul again he was in his house while I was out side trying to call him but he couldn’t hear me. I saw a wolf at the door knocking at the door. I was frightened then I quickly ran behind the bushes and I heard the wolf said “Little pig, little pig let me come in”.

 

 Paul said “No, No, not by the hair on my chinny chin, chin” so the wolf said “Then I’ll huff and I’ll blow your house down”. So the wolf huffed and he puffed but his house didn’t fall down. The wolf climbed on top of the chimney and went down; I quickly got a big pot and put it underneath the chimney so the wolf went down and in the pot.         

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under: Theme work, Work, Writing

Responses -

Hi Kesaia, Cute Pig!!! Seeing as the pig has wings, can it fly???
:)

Hi Emily
Thanks for commenting on my blog. And no he can’t fly but I wish he can. :-)

Hi Kesaia! Great blog! Your story is very imaginative! What happened to the wolf after it fell into the pot? Please reply as I would like to know. Keep up the fantastic work! :D

Hi Kesaia,

Just wondering, seeing as the pig has wings, can it fly?
Bye
Natalie :mrgreen:

P.S. Please leave a comment on my blog!

Hi Sarah,Thanks for the comment. After the wolf dropped in the pot, Paul (my fantasy creature) cooked the wolf and ate him. :cool: :lol:

Hello Kesaia,

Nice piece of work there.

I’m a Year 8 student at Te Awamutu Intermediate which is in New Zealand. Our class has been blogging for almost a year now and we love it when other people come and view our blogs. So could you please leave a comment on my blog and visit some of my class mates blogs.

Thankyou very much,

Laura

Hi NatNat
Thanks for commenting on my blog.
Paul My fantasy creature can’t fly. :cool: :lol:

Hey Kesaia,
Thankyou for leaving me a message.
We had our cross country a couple days ago and I got first so I was very pleased.
Congratualtions on getting 2nd in your crosscountry and 33rd in the Interschools. Our interschools are next week.

Once again thankyou,
Laura

YAY! I’m ninth to comment. Is this story based on the three little pigs? What happened when the wolf fell into the pot?

Hi Kesaia :mrgreen:
You have just been tagged by me who was tagged by Naveen in New Zealand :) Just go to my blog and there you can see what you have to do.
Anyway see ya!
Natalie

Hi,Clement
Thanks for commenting on my blog.
@ Clement -yes my story is based on the three little pigs and after the wolf fell in the pot the pig cooked him and ate him. :cool:
kesaia

hiya kesaia thanks for you’r comment on my bio poem and my class and i would like to thank you’r school for sending us that book Are We There Yet and you can look at my wiki there you can see the facts we wrote :) you’r country is amazing lol

Thanks rebecca xxxxxxxxx

Hi there Kesia!!,
Jus lyk 2 say nice pig! real cool..oh yeah does it have normal legs.

anywayz cya l8rzz!!

Salote

P.S
nice pig

Hiya Kesia.I love your Fantasy creature.It’s so cute good idea!

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